Yeah I never give up even though I get a lower score in Mock TOEFL. Indeed seeing everybody else got a higher score and done well make me feel suck. But it is not what I do. I did not want to cry because of my score. I gonna learn to fix it. I have to. It is okay. I know my weakness now. I will keep my motivation up. Please pray for me. I know I can . Insha Allah.
Grade my ESSAY !
Basically,
our life and our grandparents’ had a lot of difference. I do agree life today
is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. A
lot of changes had occurred in our life as the time flies. Why I said so?
Obviously, the discovery of technology and the creativity of people from all
around the world succeed in making our life better and easier.
First, life
today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were
children because of technology. Our era is full of technology and indeed we as
the consumer really depend on it. The lucid example is the presence of the
Internet. Internet somehow makes our life easier in obtaining any information
from all over world. We did not have to travel across the country just to
attain the information that we need. Furthermore, latest news that has updated
from time to time can help students in doing their researches.
Second, the
creativity in enhancing the system in the transportation makes our life easier. Focusing on public transportation especially
train, citizens had been used for a long time to reduce the traffic jam.
However, it was not efficient enough. For example, five decades ago, our
grandparents need to struggle in order to be at the destination. In fact, they
need to move earlier because the journey will take a longer time. They also need a lot of fuel that cost so
beyond their limit. Today, in Japan, the bullet train with the highest speed is
build for saving our time. Existence of bullet train also helps citizens to
save their money, as the price is reasonable.
In the
conclusion, indeed I am strongly believed that life today is easier and more
comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. The discovery of
technology and the creativity of people are the reason why our life better and
easier.
Thanks. Adios Amigos
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